Favorite sentence and why

My favorite sentence in my essay is —"Both relationship from Olivia and Lorenzo to Aamir and Ishaan was about turning someone that was tired of living, disappointed and felt misunderstood into a person that believes in one's own potential and bright future." I like this sentence because it tells the biggest similaritiy I wanted to relate throughout the two relationships in both stories. And I think this is my main analysis and conclusion within a sentence. I also like this sentence because it is telling a really positive change in people.